Second half (part three) still needs a few 'bits'; I will write them on my computer at Cafe del Sol (I have spent many happy hours here working on something or other!), then go back to the condo and print the whole thing out. Determined to be done by 5pm. If I finished by 2:30, I could go to yoga at 3, but that seems a bit of a stretch (!)....
Two thoughts in the meantime:
- I overuse the words "as" and "that"
- Though I think that sometimes the effect of elegant variation should be deliberately embraced, it is probably just as well that I have only used the word "confiture" once (there are seven instances of jam)